Thursday, February 5, 2009

The mystery : Fiction part 3

After I got home from school I called my best friend Madaline. (She's from paris in france!!!)We met on our first day of kindergarten, I found crying at recess because she could barley speak English. I teached her and she told me a few things to. ever since Me + her = BFF. ''Hello? Madaline, Meet me at my in my room.'' Then I called my 2 other BFF's one from china, one from Mexico. They all moved to America. When they all came we went to the woods behind my back yard in are favorite place. ''So what problem do we need to solve?'' asked Naomi the Spanish girl. ''Well... I been seeing robbery and I think it's the same person'' I answered. ''Perphaps we should start with clues'' suggested Ivy the chinese girl. I looked embarrassed I did'nt have helpfull clues! ''All I saw was the person had brown curls'' I said. Naomi burst in to tears. Naomi was VERY tuff and NEVER cried what was wrong? ''Thaat's the saame person who took every last bit of my family's money and I might have to go back to Mexico because we only have mexacin money''. sobbed Naomi saying the letter sounds more than it's to, but that's a course cause she was crying. WHAT!!! gasped me and Ivy and & Madeline. ''You can't'' I said. then there was a long silence......

2 comments:

Rachel Youngling said...

ahhhh!

Rachel said...

I love your story! I'm glad you like mine!!